2-13-2011

soul meets soul

 

 

Melt

Melting

This moment grasped my special weakness

Heat graced over my being

Layers of separation slowly collided

Moisture and desire fused together

Awakened alive

 

Kiss

His kiss

A guidance for lyrical winds

Captured

Stained within

Pleasing the purest essence

Which one finds best self in

 

Breath

I breathed

Dizzy with devotions plea

Caresses promised half a dream

Soul locked on pleasures state of mind

Taking

Drowning

Drawing me into a blissful whine

 

Low

Lower

His lips slid down my neck

Giving definition

What I longed for to be met

The alluring the serene

Quivered in passions deep  

 

Fell

Free fell

Into a place of never free

Where time had no choice but to stand still

With the press of his lips

His hands filled with me

I remember exactly how he looked

Exactly how he smelled

Exactly how he felt

It’s so clear as if it happened yesterday

A Sunday morning

A random visit

It was one year ago today

When my love was proven real

Author's Note

Only if lucky one will get a chance to be in a moment like this

Reviews

[Chris]

You captured many minds with this piece... it spoke so well that others found it necessary to answer. The 'tone' though soft is complete and leaves the listener wish-full.

Chris

[Christina]

This is such a tender and beautiful write, you capture the feeling of love so eloquently. Gorgeous writing.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Kiss

His kiss

A guidance for lyrical winds.............absolutely beautiful!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Moments like these stay etched in hearts forever!!

A second
A minute
An hour
A day
A week
A month
A Year........

Time doesn't matter when you are so in love.......

A breathtakingly beautiful write.......

:o)

[Forest Green]

Nicely tender; sincerity met with passion. Your poem is as perfect as such a moment can be.

Excellent...!

[Thea]

Wow...You're lucky to meet the destined guy in your life...This piece is absolutely touching and heartfelt...Great work...
:)))

[.]

liked the way - the repetative start to each stanza gave a strong definition to the poem..there is something quite overwhelming about this love..nicely penned.

[Amila Jay]

Yeah wow, this is very nice!! A lovely write:-)

[EMF]

Hat. Doft. At sheer perfection. A blend of romance and passion. Superb, sublime and lots of other positive words begining with S

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The hopeless romantic in me is in awe of this poem... now that is what I call passion and a paradise for just two hearts.