2-13-2011

soul meets soul

 

 

Melt

Melting

This moment grasped my special weakness

Heat graced over my being

Layers of separation slowly collided

Moisture and desire fused together

Awakened alive

 

Kiss

His kiss

A guidance for lyrical winds

Captured

Stained within

Pleasing the purest essence

Which one finds best self in

 

Breath

I breathed

Dizzy with devotions plea

Caresses promised half a dream

Soul locked on pleasures state of mind

Taking

Drowning

Drawing me into a blissful whine

 

Low

Lower

His lips slid down my neck

Giving definition

What I longed for to be met

The alluring the serene

Quivered in passions deep  

 

Fell

Free fell

Into a place of never free

Where time had no choice but to stand still

With the press of his lips

His hands filled with me

I remember exactly how he looked

Exactly how he smelled

Exactly how he felt

It’s so clear as if it happened yesterday

A Sunday morning

A random visit

It was one year ago today

When my love was proven real

Author's Note

Only if lucky one will get a chance to be in a moment like this

Reviews

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Wow this was a great piece. You took me through a journey there. The structure really brings this to life. It sounds good when read aloud. Good writing Cas!

Captured

Stained within

Pleasing the purest essence

Which one finds best self in

This line stood out yo.

[Richard Layne]

Writing happy thoughts is the toughest thing and you've accomplished it well without being too sentimental or carnal. This is really well done. i specifically like how you start each stanza playing with tenses

[KAREN]

Whew! A lovely write and done with romantic taste! BEAUTIFUL!!!

[André-J-Franklin]

I love the romantic theme being expressed here!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the moment you expressed so beautifully and romanticly!

[Me]

excellent, love the message

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and beautiful poem of love. I like the description and the emotion of the words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem of love and thankfulness.
Coyote

[Manpreet]

Dreamy, sensuous and magical work here! I liked the intricate flow of thoughts here! Great write!

[Rene Velez]

Sensual and imaginative, lustful and sublime, nice words in an embrace of love

[J Todd Underhill]

Well written! I agree to find that one certain special love is beyond compare and makes one lucky!