CASTLED

My heart beats like a one woman army placing ahead, what my mind begs to leave behind...

Casually Drifting in Conflicted Direction, she pushes on
Delivering fake smiles to those who Can’t see and Dismissing the Concerned Chatters of-
“her Demeanor has Changed.” and “the Compassion in her eyes has Disappeared.”
Closed-fisted and with Caution she Coasts through the Disturbed Chambers within her Contour
facing the Disputes that has Defeated her mind and Congested her Chest with Charmed Devotions
Captivated… she tells herself, never again…
Desired Dreams are only Conceived to be Conquered by Distance and Denying’s
Cherished Confidence in a Caress is only a feeling made to Diminish in Despair
Chasing beliefs and fighting for a Common love when odds are against you Can’t be won

Castled-
numb-
Convincing only goes so far when heart Dominates over mind
let go was the Demand... but letting go is the Dilemma

Author's Note

Yup.... yall are bout to hear my tears... sorry its the only place I can do it...

Reviews

[Muse]

I know what you mean about coming here to cry. WC has become a place of refuge for me. If listening to your tears is always this beautiful...keep crying for us ...your friends here will wipe them dry.

[Forest Green]

Brilliant, emotion-packed, very effective in its twists and turns.

Complicated feelings are sometimes the worst kind...

Excellent work...!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I really enjoyed this. I can relate myself. I really liked the honesty within this. I really thought you did a fabulous job on this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Andrea Vargas]

I love this, I can really relate to it and I beleive it is one of the most beautiful videos ever! I love your sence of passion that you send to me through your amzingly fantastic words!

Such an excellent and brilliant piece hun! wow..... very creative, and honest! love it!

[Rene Velez]

ah yes love and loss, the realizations and barriers to grasp that gold ring of happiness and comfort, trials my dear trials, lol.

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what a nice write.!!
i liked this :)

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what a nice write.!!
i liked this :)

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what a nice write.!!
i liked this :)