LET ME STAY

cuz you inspire me...

Where my love drifts to beyond its height

Aspirations are touched upon without wish

Where findings are found within sight

Embraced and protected through the complexity of what exists

Into the kneeling golden rays of infinity

Into the indigo stained nowhere of serenity

As far as I can go

Let me stay- 

Author's Note

a simple piece, with a simple purpose... = )

((thank you Aaron for the beautiful view!!!))

Reviews

[Revery]

Beautiful wonderful write!

[Amila Jay]

Very nice indeed:-)

[Mary C]

An interesting use of figurative language to capture the mood.

[sts.]

Life is to be continued. Nice touch on this one.

[TheSweet]

If you use both clichés 'there's no place like home' and 'wherever I lay my hat is my home'... then there's no place like your hat :P

...I have no idea why I thought of that. This poem obviosuly shot my mind into a bizzare direction. I like it though, thanks. :)

[Courtney Taylor]

touching...really touching

[etxcp]

I like it!!!!!!! Its a beautiful piece!!!!!!!!! So insprational! Wonderful!!!!! Write more!!!!!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a beautiful write. I can imagine a beautiful place in my mind that I would love to stay in. I loved it. The picture went nicely. Thanks for sharing.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the words and the photo. The gentle and kind words create a peaceful place and vision. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[joshua deathdealer]

beautiful work.