LET ME STAY

cuz you inspire me...

Where my love drifts to beyond its height

Aspirations are touched upon without wish

Where findings are found within sight

Embraced and protected through the complexity of what exists

Into the kneeling golden rays of infinity

Into the indigo stained nowhere of serenity

As far as I can go

Let me stay- 

Author's Note

a simple piece, with a simple purpose... = )

((thank you Aaron for the beautiful view!!!))

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Lovely work! It eases readers mind inviting all senses into another world to stay. Great work!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Breathtaking! As far as the eye can take you, the mind can go much further... Amazing imagery! Thank you for taking me there. :)

[Siddhartha]

Short, simple and so resonant! Love this.

[Muse]

serenity with a purpose....it just doesn't get much better than that. Thank you for sharing the sunset that inspired you so.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Deep breath, than a sigh! Your words are excellent sereen in itself! The picture added flavor to a well written piece!

[Sarah]

Short but effective

[TawnyBlueStar]

Beautiful :D
the photo goes really well with your poem :)

[?]

Beautiful and well written

[Richard Layne]

This is really well written. Makes ME feel good. i really like the juxtaposition of going and staying at the end--works well.

[Demi Rose]

lovely and inspirational.