CONSCIENCE

Whispers in a notion unending
Division seeps delicately into my guilty skin
Peace has yet to come

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Peace has not come says it all. At the end of a relationship doesn't matter if it is a romantic one or a friendship, there always seems to be a point where you think about it and it takes time to find peace.

[BlueDreams]

short yet with a deep meaning .. awesome write :-)

[Manpreet]

Vow! Simply amazing lines with a right picture to match! Lovely and amazing work!

[Arielle Ann]

guilt is something which slowly drives one towards self denial...I am so accustomed with this feeling and you made it sound just perfect in three lines...peace will take a long time to come!

[Forest Green]

Guilt, sensually touched and elementally fervent.

Nicely done...!

[zero binty]

This has a haunting feel to it. Like pieces of a story needing to be told. Feels true. So much said in so very few words.

[Kenneth The Poet]

An engaging piece, one that allows for deep meditation.

[screamin'ian]

Packs a punch.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow....got many different emotions as I read...
and the last line...'peace has yet to come'
stunning ending I feel...