CONSCIENCE

Whispers in a notion unending
Division seeps delicately into my guilty skin
Peace has yet to come

Reviews

[The old me]

I think everyone wants peace. well done

[Thea]

Wow...Expressing something in few words - Just great! Yay! :)))

[Me]

Excellent penning

[Amila Jay]

It's like waiting forever!! Great write:-)

[tkersh]

Nice meter, very spare and elegant. If 9/14/5 isn't already a form, it should be; you do it well. "Peace has yet to come" conveys so much: wanting it to come, knowing it will take time, trusting that it will.

[Andrea Vargas]

I like this, its simple yet elegant in diction and movement.

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Sometimes we say much more with so few words a great flow from a hell of a poet my friend very empressed course your writting always connects and thats the most important thing in my book when it comes to writting cheers Gonzo

Pure art... beautifully phrased, whispers of the unending wind, catched in this beauty of your words.... yes, peaceful. Muuuwah! to you thanks for sharing xx

[WhiteWillow]

Feelings of guilt and sadness always seem to last longer than happiness. A beautiful write.