CONSCIENCE

Whispers in a notion unending
Division seeps delicately into my guilty skin
Peace has yet to come

Reviews

[André-J-Franklin]

This differently reminds me off a haiku! It unique i like it the picture environment looks so blah which would be like alot of our conscience and the influences we face in life but that my hypothesis on the picture.

[Antonio Valentino]

skin does have, sin, as part of its word..

enjoyed this

thanks for share!

[Allen Smuckler]

very "haikuish" without being a Haiku...
you've said quite a mouthful though Emphasis
about guilt and peace
well done
allen

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The answer will always come from within, sometimes you just have to give it time.

[J Todd Underhill]

For a brief write this say a lot with the picture as a visual aid.

[EMF]

Oh Yes. Dark and doomed, delicate and delicious. And such power. Doesn't hit you straight away, but creeps up on you and reminds you it's there. In the back of your head, definatley not going anywhere. A wonderful write and even though bleak, diamond brilliance.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So much said in a small way! loved it!

[Jibey]

Ah... 'consceince doth make cowards of us all'... A telling composition

[Emily Rae]

you've paired some intense verse with great imagery here. well done!

[Revery]

I am a fan of shorter verses and especially when they are packed with meaning and intensity. Excellent, loved it.