CONSCIENCE

CONSCIENCE

A Poem by Cassie Fraga

Whispers in a notion unending
Division seeps delicately into my guilty skin
Peace has yet to come

© 2012 Cassie Fraga


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This differently reminds me off a haiku! It unique i like it the picture environment looks so blah which would be like alot of our conscience and the influences we face in life but that my hypothesis on the picture.

Posted 12 Years Ago


skin does have, sin, as part of its word..

enjoyed this

thanks for share!

Posted 12 Years Ago


very "haikuish" without being a Haiku...
you've said quite a mouthful though Emphasis
about guilt and peace
well done
allen

Posted 12 Years Ago


The answer will always come from within, sometimes you just have to give it time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


For a brief write this say a lot with the picture as a visual aid.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Oh Yes. Dark and doomed, delicate and delicious. And such power. Doesn't hit you straight away, but creeps up on you and reminds you it's there. In the back of your head, definatley not going anywhere. A wonderful write and even though bleak, diamond brilliance.

Posted 12 Years Ago


So much said in a small way! loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ah... 'consceince doth make cowards of us all'... A telling composition

Posted 12 Years Ago


you've paired some intense verse with great imagery here. well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I am a fan of shorter verses and especially when they are packed with meaning and intensity. Excellent, loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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