TAKING THE POWER BACK

Time is just an excuse...

I rush…  

Into the bitter disdainful face of time dipping its rain on my horizon

With ire standing out in a reedy smile… it waits not.

Spanning the distance between the sea and sky

My fingertips quiver as I trace the drips and drops hushing the cruelty in its sounds

Pause-

                Gaze-

                                Harsh whisper-

“I am still afraid… but I refuse to let you defeat…”  

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I found myself sitting here holding my breath for quite awhile after reading this wonderful gem.

[stormwarden]

Interesting poem. Well done.

[Thea]

“I am still afraid… but I refuse to let you defeat…”
Wow...This is totally stunning...Excellent usage of words...
Keep it up!
:)))

[Forest Green]

Resisting the mood of darkness and self-doubt. It seems you've illustrated with your words the strength to be found in determination to find one's self and be therein satisfied.

Nicely written...with an amazing image.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Time" is a mortal's enemy...The sheer determination to fight against it is Powerful.
Although we fear it, we are still in command of our strength within ourselves. Nice write!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Strong and powerful. I love the last line! Bravo!

[Revery]

This is strong, so much imagery packed into a few lines. So much passion and determination. Determination to rise above and not be destroyed by darkness. Great job

[THIS ACCOUNT IS CLOSED]

This poem was so awesome!
Spanning the distance between the sea and sky

My fingertips quiver as I trace the drips and drops hushing the cruelty in its sounds




Super intence