TAKING THE POWER BACK

Time is just an excuse...

I rush…  

Into the bitter disdainful face of time dipping its rain on my horizon

With ire standing out in a reedy smile… it waits not.

Spanning the distance between the sea and sky

My fingertips quiver as I trace the drips and drops hushing the cruelty in its sounds

Pause-

                Gaze-

                                Harsh whisper-

“I am still afraid… but I refuse to let you defeat…”  

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow...Wow. This sent shivers up my spine. You completely demolished any boundaries between time and space. I felt as if every second of my life fell down in suspended animation infront of me. This is an event that totally changed my perception of reality. Brilliant work. The end is an epiphany that empowers and inspires.

Such a beautiful piece, when you shared it yesterday, I was in awe, this is so deep, and so poignant... yet you make your words dance into universe... great work!!!!

[EMF]

Absolutley stunning. Empowering beyond belief and with such class and craftsmanship it belays its brevity. A rainbow through a diamond prisom. Beautiful

[Manpreet]

Vow a masterpiece that takes beyond their meaning to a great depth. a perfect start and a great closing. Amazing work!

[Warren L.G De Mills]

So much put into so few words. This was great. I loved your imagery and language, those are my two favorite things to see a writer use. Good job

[WhiteWillow]

Facing your fears can makes you something better than strong; rather, victorious. Wonderful write!

[joshua deathdealer]

I love this. Awesome work!! xx

[stars are far]

This is soo nice ...
great work sis

[Lily Mae]

Wow.. there is nothing like taking back your personal power after having it either stolen or gifted away.. This itself is that power and contagious...xo