DESCRIBE IT

its all so.... invigorating

DESCRIBE IT-

If I had to describe it… I would say…

It’s a contraction of whispered dreams immersed by different levels of inspiration.

It’s the ideas and beautiful mystery of the immortal and its powers

fighting to keep beating even when it’s lost

It’s the uncontrolled spirit castled in the depths of my attention

Blending wisdom and reasoning to walk hand in hand with my

imagination

Creating worlds of ways for my mortal essence to pare away

It’s the prophecy and secrets within the ghosts that haunt me

Caged and penetrating in the pit of my soul craving to breathe still

It’s an unmeasured pull of expressing marveled moments over an empty page

It’s exhaled and seen to come to be through a variety of metaphors, quotations, and verses

Building new passages and views on fantasy vs. reality.

It’s a fall out, a physical vanishing of self.

It’s a dialect within a dialect

Confessing every emotion within emotions

Connecting void within voids

Recognizing truth from lies

A vision within a vision

Confronting and questioning the “what is” and “what if’s”

Every synonym marked surrounds and transmits me into a unique detail of senses

 

Every verb, noun, and punctuation, stains of experience catching the hour and setting the mood

Every letter holds a meaning, a change, a thought, a feeling…

It’s a testimonial trance, blaming, restraining, surrendering, and convincing

It’s passion burning of different colored flames untamed and free

Its illustrations sharply drawn on perception of life

Symbol after symbol eyes connect in the sky of situation

Fate vs. time; real vs. circumstance

It’s stepping into a world beyond this

Defending, pushing, maintaining, upholding hope and all of its mystic

A battle cry, feeling the sensations through message

Being a part of something bigger then yourself

An unconditional acceptance

Notes meeting and reaching for the unknown in future, lessons in

past, and embracing the present

It sweeps me through it… all of it

A journey of wonderland, and certainty

My wonderland, and certainty

If I had to describe it… I would say…

Its-

Me.

Author's Note

is the font to bold??? did n e one have trouble reading it???

**okay sooooo tried to fix the font but for some stupid reason it wont let me.... so I just spaced it out alil... maybe now it will be easier to read!!** THANX FOR ALL YO FEEDBACK GUYS!!!

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

So much of your thoughts spreas out on the page. A bold way to express and as always i am delighted to read what goes through that fabulous mind of yours! Keep on keepin' on!

[Rene Velez]

Hopeful and uplifting, inspiring write of self and existence, well done...

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The font IS a little too much but you've described writing and poetry in detail I didn't think was possible. I think you've drained every drop of ideas out of this one and then some. It must have taken a lot of time and thinking. Wow, Good work.

[Aidz]

Yup not so much to bold but to small combined with the bold very hard on my weary eyes.

Some kewl lines that transmit thought through this vessel

[Arielle Ann]

this was vivid and rich...you tried bringing in all the facets of your journey, of you as a person ; and let me tell you, you succeeded in your try...its difficult to describe the tangle of emotions we encounter whenever we settle to discover ourselves...but you succeeded in creating that in a free flow...no confusion...just an enriching description!

[Lily Mae]

Amen... :) This is so strong.. a powerhouse of emotion and strength..the journey to self.. nothing better :D a treasure you will always find..xo

[BlueDreams]

A great and robust imagery depicted here.. You really seem to be toiled to make this craft.. A great job.. keep it up.. :-)

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Yeah it was a little too bold (the font) I had a bit of trouble wanting to read it. It looked a bit too clustered. BUT I am VERY happy I did read it. I love this piece. Such wonderful and powerful imagery such description, such depth such a story. I fell in love with this after just the first few lines. Great job! Keep this up! this is going to be the first poem in my favorites list!

[Inyourshadow]

The inner sanctum of the soul laid bare,
for all to see and see all there.
We can hide from all but one,
for they are the masks we all put on.
We must face ourselves in mirrored smile
or walk away and live forever lost in denile.

Love the poem and answered as the poem inspired me to do so.
Keep em' coming