DESCRIBE IT

its all so.... invigorating

DESCRIBE IT-

If I had to describe it… I would say…

It’s a contraction of whispered dreams immersed by different levels of inspiration.

It’s the ideas and beautiful mystery of the immortal and its powers

fighting to keep beating even when it’s lost

It’s the uncontrolled spirit castled in the depths of my attention

Blending wisdom and reasoning to walk hand in hand with my

imagination

Creating worlds of ways for my mortal essence to pare away

It’s the prophecy and secrets within the ghosts that haunt me

Caged and penetrating in the pit of my soul craving to breathe still

It’s an unmeasured pull of expressing marveled moments over an empty page

It’s exhaled and seen to come to be through a variety of metaphors, quotations, and verses

Building new passages and views on fantasy vs. reality.

It’s a fall out, a physical vanishing of self.

It’s a dialect within a dialect

Confessing every emotion within emotions

Connecting void within voids

Recognizing truth from lies

A vision within a vision

Confronting and questioning the “what is” and “what if’s”

Every synonym marked surrounds and transmits me into a unique detail of senses

 

Every verb, noun, and punctuation, stains of experience catching the hour and setting the mood

Every letter holds a meaning, a change, a thought, a feeling…

It’s a testimonial trance, blaming, restraining, surrendering, and convincing

It’s passion burning of different colored flames untamed and free

Its illustrations sharply drawn on perception of life

Symbol after symbol eyes connect in the sky of situation

Fate vs. time; real vs. circumstance

It’s stepping into a world beyond this

Defending, pushing, maintaining, upholding hope and all of its mystic

A battle cry, feeling the sensations through message

Being a part of something bigger then yourself

An unconditional acceptance

Notes meeting and reaching for the unknown in future, lessons in

past, and embracing the present

It sweeps me through it… all of it

A journey of wonderland, and certainty

My wonderland, and certainty

If I had to describe it… I would say…

Its-

Me.

Author's Note

is the font to bold??? did n e one have trouble reading it???

**okay sooooo tried to fix the font but for some stupid reason it wont let me.... so I just spaced it out alil... maybe now it will be easier to read!!** THANX FOR ALL YO FEEDBACK GUYS!!!

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

You have described it beautifully!! Awesome poem:))

[Asb]

a great combination of thoughts...words and self description....!!
a very beautiful piece of poem!
i loved how you ended it! :)

[TheSweet]

Well, I was able to read it, and I enjoyed what I read. The complexity mixed with simplicity was what I liked. The words flowed really well is it was a simple piece to read but it does so much deeper, especially with the last three lines. It's an especially wavery poem, and I read it like rising smoke. Bravo :)

[KAREN]

Awesome write! I loved how this made me feel when I read it. A wonderful piece of art!
100/100

[Kenneth The Poet]

You indeed. A powerful description for sure.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An excellent poem....a type of style that I love....and the ending, so love it!!!
Lot of analysis can go into each line..terrific I find :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent brillant write, a journey upon finding ones self! Love it!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Lovely. and the ending is purely fabulous.

[Thea]

What a really creative and brilliant piece you crafted here! I felt so inspired while reading this...Thanks for sharing! :)))

[stars are far]

This was great work ..
Keep that up :D