BLUE FLAME

 

Blue flame-

Imitates the shape and intonation of another

Freezes

Stings

Leaving never healing irritations

Cast me

Hide me

Into the pulses of those lies

For I am nothing but your simple moment

Existing only in the appearance of your waking

A simple touch of thought

The fortress you had to burn

while re-inventing who you are

leave me be-

just go... leave

Author's Note

eehh... was looking at some new images... and I liked this one, so this is what I came up with...

Reviews

[Thea]

You did a very impressive and splendid imagery in here...Great work!
:)))

[daydreamer]

Fantastic image and imagery in the poem. simplicity at its best.Good work:)

[stars are far]

This was so nice ;-)
I was thinking of simplicity while reading this
well done :-D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I like the imagery of the art that you have depicted... It's hypnotizing~"Into the pulses of lies, For I am nothing but your simple moment, Existing only in the appearance of your waking, A simple touch of thought, the fortress you had to burn"~My perception of this is that of betrayal or lustful fantasy... Nice write!

[Michael X]

heartfully subtle to ache, your words are powerful and expressive with a
soft tone affair, Skillful work here :)

[Lily Mae]

It fits the poem perfectly..the intensity of both is great.. I know that feeling or sense of wonder with being someone's blue flame.. I love the way you express it here.. you rock.. :)

[Inyourshadow]

Have to agree with muse art inspires such extention of it's origonal with the added poetic content, how wonderful when the one art form can inspire another such as poetry.
Keep em' coming and A Happy New Year

[Muse]

I love it when art can inspire words. She's like a ghost...a flame that burns cold. Intriguing my dear. xo