BLUE FLAME

 

Blue flame-

Imitates the shape and intonation of another

Freezes

Stings

Leaving never healing irritations

Cast me

Hide me

Into the pulses of those lies

For I am nothing but your simple moment

Existing only in the appearance of your waking

A simple touch of thought

The fortress you had to burn

while re-inventing who you are

leave me be-

just go... leave

Author's Note

eehh... was looking at some new images... and I liked this one, so this is what I came up with...

Reviews

[KAREN]

Love the word play, nicely penned!
Cast me
Hide me
Into the pulses of those lies
Awesome!

[JRB]

very nicely put, keep up the writes

[Rene Velez]

Interesting write, I try that a times finding words to images that strike me, nice play on words " the fortress you had to burn" good line. Well done Em.

Oooh! The perfect attraction between attracting and repelling, wonderfully told. I love this one! So well done dear! x

[Forest Green]

Deception...once it's gone too far it ought to burn up, with a blue flame and be gone.

Very skillful write...and the image is not too bad either.

Well done...!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very creatively done! Great word choice and imagery added up to a well written poem that a lot can relate to! Love your picture that brought on your inspiration!

[Amanda Lee/ Isolated Dr..]

Love the line "reinventing who you are" !
Very creative

[Priscilla Sayers]

A beautifull sorrowful poem. Wonderfully done sis!

[TawnyBlueStar]

awesome inspiration :D