BLUE FLAME

 

Blue flame-

Imitates the shape and intonation of another

Freezes

Stings

Leaving never healing irritations

Cast me

Hide me

Into the pulses of those lies

For I am nothing but your simple moment

Existing only in the appearance of your waking

A simple touch of thought

The fortress you had to burn

while re-inventing who you are

leave me be-

just go... leave

Author's Note

eehh... was looking at some new images... and I liked this one, so this is what I came up with...

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this. The imagery was amazing. It was really powerful. You did a great on this. Thanks for sharing! :)

[TheSweet]

This is quite powerful. Blue being the most fierce of the flame really makes an impact, and for you to personify it with an aggressive persona at the end - I like it :) Thanks.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am taking the blue flame as a metaphor for loneliness... right or wrong it is still nicely done.

[Destiny]

Nicely done :)

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an interesting interpretation of the picture..thats an oxymoron a flames that freezes..works well here ..

[Moflo]

I like how you put this one together. Its deep and well written. Good word choices...nicely done.

[André-J-Franklin]

Love it! both it and the picture. The creativity that comes at look at a picture is so amazing you gave a picture life it's unique.

[Revery]

This is a passionate write with strong symbolism. Great job.

[Tenebrousoul]

This was a great poem. Very short, but profound. :D

[Me]

A very deep write - thought provoking