SPIRIT OF RHYTHM AND RHYME

Hypnotizing nature

Becoming one with the stage

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Rolled to the feeling and pulse of the ocean

A figure eight motion of hips

A controlled pace in sway of traditions unmasked

Fragile in movement

Pride in stance

The heart intertwines with land, honor and hour

Outstretched arms welcome the lovely sound

In the wind colors of tempo are cast

Bond is clear

Peace is grasped

Drops of the sun flow through the fingers

A language of stories in spell

Gracefully calling to dance alongside the spirits of past

Chanting of dreams

Emotion of trance

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Complex art form

Conveying message through the soul

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

((HAWAII))

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Body language can speak volumes, a very dazzling poem.

[EMF]

Hot Damn. How can I best phrase this? F*** Me that is good. Yeah. I thing that sums it up... Oh, apart from to say, More Please. Oh.. There's more. Just on the right in one of those box thingies

[Amila Jay]

Lovely write:-)

[Etoiles]

Love it, love the rhythm and language.
Beautiful piece.
:)

[Sethnicity]

Nice piece I can really feel the linear patters in this. interesting flow to this it's so amazing how location influences rhythmic intonation.

[Dahveed]

Very nice piece. It flowed nicely with a lot of imagery. I liked this and can relate to it.

[TawnyBlueStar]

:D
again, amazing :)
this is a beautiful poem :D
and I love dance, one of the best things ever :D
*jumps in awesome happiness* LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!

[Lily Mae]

You captured the true beauty and magic with this write.. xx

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

absolutely awesome........if you need some tips on working with inserting images and text, let me know. :)

[stars are far]

this was great :)