SWEET ESCAPE

Shaft the air
Winds move vastly
Exit distraction
Exit overshadowing
Taste of genuine pleasure
Ease knows no measure
Silence is silenced
Contentment removed
Amiable befitting
Promises proved
Escape… my escape… I found you

Author's Note

((BREATHE))

Reviews

So beautiful serene... wow like I feel right now :) thanks for the well written words. Such a dept in it. xo

[Betweenthekeys]

I had to chuckle a bit as "an escape" for the weekend was just what I was needing when I read you poem..I like the way you were able to be very conservative with the amount of words you used..and yet still make your point, perfectly. Simplicity and poignancy are not always easy to achieve.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautifully written.
I love the image you have painted in my mind without effort. Flawless.
Thank you for sharing such an image.

[An owl on the moon]

Your acrostic simply moves gentle as the wind... and the last line filled with the glimmer of hope. Beautifully done.

[stars are far]

this was a nice and sweet poem ...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Yes, "escape" is "sweet" when found... especially when needed so very much. Nice write!

[Inyourshadow]

Escape my escape I found you ... Love the image of love releasing one from the prison that loneliness builds up around us. There are some powerful statements in your poem especially the line silence is silenced, love that. Keep em' coming