CAGED

Have you ever felt like your emotions were caged like a wild lion waiting for release??

Pace left, against unclear winds

Agitation sinks into a system of never ending
She licks her lips
Her eyes are fixed
And endures the burn of courageously hungry

Pace right, through a demented grumble that arises annoyed
Anxious ambitions are hushed
Release is concealed within the steel of silence
She can’t retreat this emotional rush

Pace left, to the beat of a restless core
Revert and revise is whispered in closed circles
These movements become a ritual tread of measure
But her will stands still through impeded muscles

Pace right, shaking the sensation that teases her vision
Her commanding strides soften to the intensity
She fights these images of unspoken everyday
A wanting, a needing that shouldn’t be
-or-
Should it??

 

Insanity is going against the honest desire.

Author's Note

new to the game... just trying to get better as a writer!! = )

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Few people want to be caged. I like the way you expressed your desire with strong words and honest emotions.
"Anxious ambitions are hushed
Release is concealed within the steel of silence
She can’t retreat this emotional rush"
Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[BlueDreams]

The exclusive piece shared here ... appreciated your imagery... :-) A Fabulous job ..

[TawnyBlueStar]

you are getting better, I think you're a great writer
I really like this poem :D
"Pace left, to the beat of a restless core
Revert and revise is whispered in closed circles
These movements become a ritual tread of measure
But her will stands still through impeded muscles"
I think this is my favourite part :D

[EMMIE]

THESE WORDS PAINT A GREAT PICTURE, I HAVE TO GIVE YOU MAD PROPS FOR THIS ONE. VERY THROUGH PROVOKING.

[WhiteWillow]

This is a great piece, full of emotion, personified beautifully. Nicely done

[Michael X]

The flame emotive. wow, this poem is vivid word play that sparks the readers
imagination across the emotion, very, nice job!

[Sashalee]

wow this is a new interesting style i love it lol :]

[Forest Green]

Very interesting...seems to me you're describing the movements and thoughts of an untamed beast...unique!

Nice effort...truly!

[Priscilla Sayers]

And better you will become! Especially coming out of the gate like this... Great work!

[Cassie Fraga]

awwwww... thanx for luv guys!!

[The Girl with the smile]

I love the imagery! The ending is my favorite.
"Or should it?"
You are a very good writer!