PPPFFFTTTT......

when a woman is fed up... there aint nothing you can do about it...

Rehearsed eyes wall tears on cue

The speech being voiced spills poisons of all I know

A repeated scene is standing at my door step

**pppffffttt…..**

**rolls eyes**

Slamming the door never felt so good.

Author's Note

funny how a person wants to become your best friend again after a little change up...

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Excellent verse.........

[R.A. Youngblood]

Haha, wow! I really like this. Just a simple scene, and you made it in true art!
You are awesome, dude! Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

[Lily Mae]

Yes and it does feel good to slam that door and love the one your with.. (you) :) Love this...x

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

haha, you go girl... love the feisty attitude... sometimes you just gotta say I don't give a f*ck.

[Dr. Wood ?]

great title....great poem, door slamming works

[bob, small b. aka invs]

you mean scenes like that are rehearsed? i thought it was all spontaneous.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So true...said so poetically with a bite :)

[Amila Jay]

Ouch !! you said it just like that !!! A true scene !!! Super write :-)

[calu cniht]

You always leave me wondering Miss E. And while I can actually play this scene out in my own imagination, I'd never want it to be you slamming the door. Just saying.