Sewage

Sewage

A Poem by SLOVA
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Keeping up appearances.

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He swallows the casts on arms of kids
He drinks the sweat as it falls
He spends his nights flossing teeth
with bones, raw meat and all

He scratches at throats he doesn't own
He strokes the one that's his
He snaps metal between white jaunted teeth
and eats raw sewage

© 2015 SLOVA


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Like this poem, the word working is done right to really creep people out, though I enjoyed it. Sincerely Malister Mikey.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ok, EWWWW! I liked the poem, don't get me wrong; the imagery is fantastic! That first line kinda creeped me out and it just got better from there! Thanks!

Posted 9 Years Ago


SLOVA

9 Years Ago

Sadistically speaking, I'm glad it creeped you out. Thank you for the kind words, Paradox.
...........Is he a goat??
This was cool, I liked it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


SLOVA

9 Years Ago

He is no goat aha. Thank you, Marcus.
A interesting description in the poem. Create dangerous place and character. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


SLOVA

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on July 18, 2015
Last Updated on July 18, 2015
Tags: liar, deception, dark

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