feel like crying

the pain consumes me
it hurts to much to bear
my bones ack
my stomach sucks in as much as it can
my heart jerks out beating like a rocket
I feel a lump in my throat
like I might through up
my face is Rosie and boiling hot
my eyes are watery
holding back my tears
it hurts not just mentally
but physically
I can't take it
I just can't
I'm not strong enough anymore
I'm exhausted and filled with pain
it would be smart to give in
but I'm not smart
I feel like crying
all the time
if I give in
I'll cry for years

Reviews

[Lexi]

aww, I feel so bad I don't like it when you wanna cry, and I hate that your bodling up your feelings I just hate it.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

I'm sorry it's ok don't feel bad you see me happy cuz when I'm with my friends it makes me happy but I can't see u soo urethane I can soon so ya but its ok I always feel like I'm ganna cry its ok

[Lexi]

SHUT UP!!!!! It's not ok that you feel like your gonna cry all the time, that's really bad, I don't want to be rude but I need to get this in your head, please just talk to me and tell me everything, if you wanna cry do bad stuff or even worse stuff, just talk im here

[unbrakable fragile girl]

your not being rude and its not just a switch that I can turn off I can't say in my head stop feeling miserabl it's fine

[Lexi]

well talk to me then do something I really want to help you feel beter.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

I talk to u about some stuff but u don't know everything and I don't trust anyone with some stuff I'm sorry

[Lexi]

well u can trust me with ur life u know almost everything bout me but im still scared tht if u find out u will hate me but if u tell me the rest of ur life ill tell u mine

[unbrakable fragile girl]

it's fine I don't need to go back in my past I know urs and I can help but I like to keep mine locked up

[Lexi]

fine okay that's cool

[unbrakable fragile girl]

yup thanks for understanding

[chaotic katie]

line three- ache, line seven- throw up, other than that, it looks pretty good. Sounds like this is a venting piece so I hope you feel better soon.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

thank you I am really really bad at spelling like really bad so thank you for the constructive points
and it was a venting piece it's very me in every way I'm getting help but its not really helping but thank you

[chaotic katie]

anytime! i'm also a venting poet. sometimes writing (and music) can be the best therapy.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

I listen to music every second and write I my journal all the time and on hear

[chaotic katie]

you journal too? Awesome. and likewise for me. great taste in music by the way. I love black veil brides, sleeping with sirens, etc... I could go on forever.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

me too thank you music is so nice every mood your in there's a song for ,it great taste to you to

[chaotic katie]

What can I say? I'm a rocker by heart. :)

[unbrakable fragile girl]

omg you are side kick to omg the other day in school there was this poem I was writing and it was called a rocker by heart omg

[chaotic katie]

wow that's ironic! great rockers think alike. Can't wait to read it.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

I don't know about that its not very good but I'm shocked right now :-0

[chaotic katie]

why is that?

[unbrakable fragile girl]

well it's bad because I don't know it's just my friend saw it and didn't say anything but ok soo ya

[chaotic katie]

i'm sure its awesome! After all, it is a piece about rockers!

[unbrakable fragile girl]

it is so Maybe

[chaotic katie]

and if you end up hating it you can always edit!

[unbrakable fragile girl]

ya that's true

[chaotic katie]

Yes, yes it is. I do it all too often.

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

thank you I think ,I'm glad that I can make my readers feel what I feel but hopefully not for long because that wouldn't be good for you

[Steve]

So sad....... This is heartbreaking to read.