Shut up!!

Get out!
Stop leav me alone
You make everything worse
You don't know me you can't
Just shut up I can't take it
I can't take you jugging me
I can't take you thinking I'm lower
Just because I don't get good grades
Don't behave im a lower persons in your eyes
I can't take your looks that you give me
You know the
ones when you look like I'm a pice off s**t
Like I should go to hell while you should be god
Your not perfect not event close
So stop acting like it
Just
Shut up !
Stop stop stop!!

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

line two- leave, line six- judging, line nine- person, line twelve-of. Like i said, don't stress the gramatical errors too much. I really like this peice! The frustration and anger we are able to release through words makes all the difference in a peice. It makes those words mean something, it tells our stories.Also this peice is very relatable. I hate people like the ones you describe in this poem. My family is full of people exactly like that so i know what its like to be judged like that. Hope things get better for you. :)

[unbrakable fragile girl]

thank you I'm sorry your family is like this to it can be very hard at times

[chaotic katie]

anytime!

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

thank you very much

[NA]

Great rant :)