Only to breath

Only to breath

A Poem by unbrakable fragile girl

My heart pounds
my breath sinks lower and lower
Into my chest
It feels like an elifant is crushing me
Killing me
My head spins
Feelings of nausea
Come and never leav
My body crashes to the ground
Wish it would stop
Tears worm with misery
All feelings Locked up
With the key hidden
An Protected with my life
No one will get in
But that comes with a price
Loneliness and missunderstanding
My pain is to much to bear
So I flip the switch
The one that turned everything
Off
Im just a beating heart
Walking acting like I'm like you
My fake smile and laugh
Satifyes you to think I'm ok
I feel sorry
For you I lie and sneek
Behind your back
I'm sorry I can't live without it being switched
But am I living now ?
No and I never will
I can't
I'm only living to breath

© 2013 unbrakable fragile girl


Author's Note

 unbrakable fragile girl
I know it's not great and I know I'm not to good at this but it's the only way to exspress my self so I hope you like it

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title and last line- breathe, line four- elephant, line eight-leave, line eleven- warm, line seventeen- misunderstanding, line twenty five- satisfys. Only editing points i found, but like i said, dont tress it too much. Its about the emotion and the story of a piece, not the way it is worded. Again a very emotional piece, my heart breaks to hear of your strife and depression. i really like this piece, Writing is a great way to vent. Hope all goes well for you soon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


 unbrakable fragile girl

11 Years Ago

thank you very much
chaotic katie

11 Years Ago

anytime! :)

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 unbrakable fragile girl
unbrakable fragile girl

colchester, CT



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hi my name is Erica half the time I write just to write, it's not good or edited most of the time . I write just to let my feelings out so I don't self inflict. if you leave a review or comment I will.. more..

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