me and what you see

you see a goth emo chick
I see my likes
you see scares and cuts
I see pain and feeling
you see behaviour problems
I see me dealing and you on my neves
you see black bleeding finger nails
I see paint and a bad habit
you see me smile
I see the fake behind it
you see an easy target
I see you backing off fast
I see what's real and you see what's fake only I know how I feel and what my thought are you and I don't see eye to eye and we never will I'm different but so are you difference is i don't act like the crowed I express my self and there's you blending in hiding be hide others not me I won't

Author's Note

this is how people see me and the way we all have to be but I'm not another face I'm me and I express my self in ways others don't don't try to change me to fit the way we are suppose to be because I won't

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

line three-scars, line five- behavior, line thirteen- thoughts, line fourteen, crowd and myself, line fifteen, behind. Those are the only editing points i found. This is a very relatable piece with me, i understand how people judge outcast such as goths like you and I. Learn to ignore ignorant fools lik that. It gets easier in time.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

thank you it feels like it will never gets easer they don't under stained that it makes things worse and worse thanks for the support

[chaotic katie]

i understand the feeling so anytime!

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

Lol I know Lexi thanks we see throu the same eyes not eye to eye

[Lexi]

oh erica, you always do express yourself very differently and wow, thanks, i thought we saw eye to eye, i guess not lol jk

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

Thank you soo very much

[NA]

Very real and emotional piece...well expressed :)