sit and stare

sit and stare

A Poem by unbrakable fragile girl

you sit there with this face
this face of misery
only you could know
your face is pail with
thous bubbling brown eyes
looking at the floor
no one understands
in your mind
no one cares
with you stubby finger nails
that have Ben bitt down
to the max
your stress fur fills you
everyone's reaching out
for you to take
but there's no movement
your just there
not a human at all
but a black hole
that is why you can't help but
sit and stare

© 2013 unbrakable fragile girl


Author's Note

 unbrakable fragile girl
this is me daily and my only let out is music and writing I hope that some can understand but they are better now thank you

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title and last line- stare, line four pale, line five- those, line eleven- been bit, line thirteen- fulfills. Thats the only editing points i found. I love the way you are able to express yourself so openly. I understand depression all too well and i know its hard to cope with at times. Hope things get better for you soon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


 unbrakable fragile girl

11 Years Ago

thank you very much I hope so to
chaotic katie

11 Years Ago

anytime!
O thanks I'm really not good at spelling I can't help it thank you

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think the word is STARE- stair is a step

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lexi I'm who I am no matter what so ya and thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago


i know how you feel, what it's like when no one knows what your going through even if you have a disorder no one treats you differently they expect same reactions and behaviors, well they're not getting it cuz imma be who and what i wanna be!! and you should too

Posted 11 Years Ago



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 unbrakable fragile girl
unbrakable fragile girl

colchester, CT



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hi my name is Erica half the time I write just to write, it's not good or edited most of the time . I write just to let my feelings out so I don't self inflict. if you leave a review or comment I will.. more..

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