shadows

shadows

A Poem by unbrakable fragile girl

is that you ..
or is it a figment of my imagination lurking around the corner
could it really be you
no it's not it's my own shadow haunting me in the dark mist
it look so much like that person the one I use to know wall growing thiner and closer
It couldn't be, the only person
the only person who knows ,who cares
that person left in the whispering shadows a long time ago
why the shadow appears again but to haunt me and throw a stabbing pain in my memory chills gliding down my back
it's a reminder the ghost of my past leerks me in my shadows
forever

© 2013 unbrakable fragile girl


Author's Note

 unbrakable fragile girl
I found this in one of my journals and decided to write it down hear kind of suck but hey it was made a while back but can I get feed back pleas

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I like this piece. The way you worded it, being phusically haunted by memories. Nicely penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


 unbrakable fragile girl

11 Years Ago

thank you very much is there any spelling problems
chaotic katie

11 Years Ago

i think lurks in the second to last line, but i'm not entirely sure. Other than that no. and anytime.. read more
Omg thanks I happy you like it wow we are depressed buddy's arnt we nice what a friend ship


Posted 11 Years Ago


amazing, just amazing, loved it and no it doesn't suck it rocks ill post one that i wrote when i was like 11 it was when i first go tdepression

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I think we all have ghosts of our past...I enjoyed your read :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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 unbrakable fragile girl
unbrakable fragile girl

colchester, CT



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hi my name is Erica half the time I write just to write, it's not good or edited most of the time . I write just to let my feelings out so I don't self inflict. if you leave a review or comment I will.. more..

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