darkness

the darkness grows deeper and deeper
once it grows it dosent stop

it never will it consumes you into nothing the feeling
of rage and anger go first

sadness comes second then your left with longness and loneliness
in till it all just fades to nothingness
darkness fills you and then there you are


walking darkness

Reviews

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

thank you I didn't think this was good and I was going to take it down but I decided that I shouldn't

[chaotic katie]

second to last line- until, other than that, flawless. I love how you personified looming depression, nice job!