My Eyes Will See Through

My Eyes Will See Through

A Poem by Nicholas Hagenschneider

will i be able to sleep tonight

will i be able to make things right

will i be able to stand and fight

will i be able to stay alive

i wasn't able to you coming

but i will say that you look stunning

like a fox you are so cunning

will i be able to stop running

 

my eyes

will see you

my eyes

will see through

through you

 

will i be able to turn around

will i be able to break these bounds

will i be able to be found

will i be able to hear your sound

i wasn't able to make it back

but i will say that you look stunning

i must say that my speed is lacking

will i be able to stop running

 

my eyes

will see you

my eyes

will see through

through you

© 2010 Nicholas Hagenschneider


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it is a song actually haha so very nice observation, everything i have written are lyrics actually.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this reads like lyrics. you ought to make a song out of it.

"but i will say that you look stunning" I very much like that line.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Nicholas Hagenschneider
Nicholas Hagenschneider

Monroe, OH



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My name is Nick, I am 22 years old, i live in monroe ohio, i write lyrics as much as possible. music is my life and it's in my blood. i draw japanese animation, which i only do when i'm bored. i a.. more..

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