the silence

The silence and night close around me

it seems to echo my breaths

the night air is cool and sharp like a blade

i close my eyes and spin in a large circle

gently humming mayday parade bruised and scarred

i slowly slide from concisness 

and slip to the ground...

and the silence has finally killed me

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bare trees]

This has a deeper meaning then it would appear but the overall meaning for me is that life has spun so far out of control that there was no other alternatives other then death. The cry for help is so often done through actions rather then admitting it. Good poem Abbie.

[Canicus]

short but filled with meaning. I like it, well done.