lies

lies

A Poem by Abbie

your a liar

not a friend

just a huge liar

I'm sick of your crap

your lies, your everything

 

 

Your fake

all so very fake

you try to live others lives

Dress like them

act like them

laugh like them

 

YOUR A FAKE,AND A LIAR SO JUST STOP

your not me

you never will be

so stop trying

 

No one likes a liar

or a fake so there

i said it now stop

© 2011 Abbie


Author's Note

Abbie
this is my way of taking out my anger,im sick of teenage girl drama!!!! >:(

p.s that pic is of my new baby cousin hes so cute:)

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Drama never ends. It's the basic state of the human condition.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is true and you have a wonderful poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Dang this is so true. So many ppl out there trying to fit in but it aint cool. Amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I hate to tell you that it never changes even as we grow older. We just get wiser and learn how to handle it a lot better if we are smart. Excellent

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well done (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've certainly put your feelings out there in a simple way that could be plainly understood by all. Good for you. I'm not quite sure why you put the picture of your baby cousin on a poem like this though?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very true. You're practically screaming in the poem. You can feel the anger in it. Really good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It feels good to put words to a piece to express a bit of rage...

Nice Poetic Rant!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 13 Years Ago


niice poem i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the strong and directness of this poem. Sometime we need to be honest and strong. Tell the liars to leave us alone and stay away from our space. A very strong ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Abbie

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my name is Abbie, i love 2 write poetry,but i am mostly nice anything you want to know ask more..

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