Cuts

 i cut to feel better

better that is my wish

to have a better life

and have my mom,

an grandma back

but i know cutting is bad

but i will do anything

to have a normal life again

normal thats all i need

is be normal but

that will never happen

never again will i have my

old life back never

 

 

Author's Note

just kinda random but this is rated mature because little kids don't need to learn about being EMO

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I understand your emotion here because i have been through this act. It's not an easy one to break and it's hard to think as if we'll ever be how we used to be. Though I am done with this now, I gave it up because of those around me, i saw how it effected them...but i never really stopped for myself. It's never an easy emotional thing to go through, but I've been through it and able to rid of it for the better.

[Gone]

Cutting isn't going to make things easier. It only adds to the pain. It's real deep and I love it. I'm here if you need a hug. Hershey Kisses, PeanutButterLove
P.S. I love this poem

[SweetHeart (:]

okay abbie i know we dont get along but cutting isnt gunna make things better. you are normal juss bc u dont have your mom and pep doesnt mean your not normal dont go emo or whatever hows come you always act so piped at school and on the bus and on here your like a dredding puppy wtf!!??? but i do realli think this is deep and i reallii like it(:

[MandaBear]

this write is powerful......

[Tommy]

I wouldn't call it EMO, I used to cut to cope; it isn't healthy, and I don't recommend it. However, some at times will do horrific things just to get by, and I don't judge for it. I hope all who travel this road will find a better way to cope, like writing.

Keep Writing!
RLG,
Tommy

[Steve]

First off....I really hope you dont cut! But having said that.....this write is powerful......

[lapacekjulie]

y would they beor wanna be EMO!lol

[The Doctor]

Well I'm not into the cutting thing or will i ever be, but very good. Again very good job at providing the reader with a little something to think about. But know, there is always a better release than self-harm.

[Moebia]

It's good. Not sure if you're jokingc in the author's note or not (cause I'm stupid xD), but cutting doesn't make you "emo". :D

This poem has potential. Replace some words, capitalize words and it would be perfect. Good job :)

[*skittlez*]

i like this i agree with cookie monster