friends v.s. enemys

                        Friends

       caring,helpful

           giggly,beauty,sweetness

             together,genuine,foe,opponet 

  mean,beware,grudge,                                           

              selfish,shabby     

        enemy 

 

     

Author's Note

just got bored please review

Reviews

[Bare trees]

That pretty much sums it up.

[The old me]

colors put it together really good. word choices are good too :)

[lapacekjulie]

i better be your friend not enemy

[Marie Harrison]

This looks like a diamante poem. It's great. I love it.

[Short.Nerd]

Love the colors! Great job!

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

Colorful. It's interesting how you begin the poem with 'friends' then go on to mention the great things about a true friend then they fall into more negative aspects of a person... and then ending it with enemies. Just a typical high school friendship... short and straight to the point... I like it.

[sarah]

I love the different colors this is great!

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Interesting discriptive words, describing friends... A Good poem, A little hard to read with the font size an color, but all in all, a good job

[Liza]

very thin line - if a friend does too much of the caring without any of it in return - the selfish and self preserving nature will turn that friend into an enemy - its a two way street to nurture...