if i die young

If I die young

Don't mourn my passing

forget I ever lived

don't cry over me

get rid of all my stuff

and erase me from your memory

and i'm just a figure of your imagination

if i die young

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

please review and send me any grammar mistakes or any questions thanks a bunch


-ABBIE :) :p

Reviews

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I can't imagine anyone being able to do that..your someone's daughter, sister, grandaughter..your request seems out of kilter with how people who love you would deal with this...but it's a thought provoking write..indeed.

[bluessadmood]

Very creative and thoughtful..
its very hard to do that,really i could never
to ask that if i die,no one mourn my passing
burn all my stuff and forget that i ever lived
thats not only dying ,its like someone determined
to see hell itself..when passing i guarantee all hoping they will be remembered
with love..even their stuff so much cherished
its this moment when we go is hardest,its like being plucked from earth
but we still hope that some memory will linger on..or its hell for sure
really intriguing ,and thoughtful write
lovely write..

[Wondering Mind]

very sad piece of writing. To wish for erasure form the minds of others is the ultimate death.... Very sad

[Iftwopoetswerestranded]

What you will hear from most editors is that grammar, when it comes to poetry, is largely subjective. I would concider removing the, "and," which begins the second to last line. I like this poem but it is very, very sad.