why
A Poem by
Abbie
why do we cry
when were all alone
why do people die
every day
why does the sun rise
every morning
why does every day
seem like a life time
why are there gangs
and wars
why why why why??????
do we sleep and cry
© 2010 Abbie
Reviews
These are good questions but they are also the ones that cannot ever be answered. Great write!!
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Posted 14 Years Ago
This writing reflects sadness that everyone at some time or another has felt...keep writing :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
This writing reflects sadness that everyone at some time or another has felt...keep writing :)
interesting questions..which I am sure we have all asked once in our lifetime..nice work
Posted 14 Years Ago
interesting questions..which I am sure we have all asked once in our lifetime..nice work
I love all of these questions and the sadness behind there potential answers. Very thought provoking poem. Well done.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I love all of these questions and the sadness behind there potential answers. Very thought provoking poem. Well done.
Sometimes Things Need To Be. In Motion And The Ocean Of Emotions Can Be Different Than Most Peoples. Each Day We Strive To Survive Another Day. Taking It And Running Away Is Most Common But Mostly We Sit Back And See It In Another View. These Gangs And Wars Are Never Ending. Always There And Most Of All.....
Why Do We Keep Believing Hope Can Be A Cure For The Impossible?
I Like This One. Very Good From A Sadden State.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Sometimes Things Need To Be. In Motion And The Ocean Of Emotions Can Be Different Than Most Peoples. Each Day We Strive To Survive Another Day. Taking It And Running Away Is Most Common But Mostly We Sit Back And See It In Another View. These Gangs And Wars Are Never Ending. Always There And Most Of All.....
Why Do We Keep Believing Hope Can Be A Cure For The Impossible?
I Like This One. Very Good From A Sadden State.
Indeed, why. A sad set of reflections. Welcome to the Café and good luck with you writing
Posted 14 Years Ago
Indeed, why. A sad set of reflections. Welcome to the Café and good luck with you writing
Hello Abbie,
A sad poem.
Regards,
Matthew
Posted 14 Years Ago
Hello Abbie,
A sad poem.
Regards,
Matthew
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