why

why do we cry

when were all alone

why do people die

every day

why does the sun rise

every morning

why does every day

seem like a life time

why are there gangs

and wars

why why why why??????

do we sleep and cry

Reviews

[LoopyLoo]

:-)

[LoopyLoo]

I especially like the bit about !Why foes the sun rise every morning" This is a question i would really like answering becasue some days i just don't want it to rise. :-)

[LoopyLoo]

:-)
This is so good. :-)

[Bare trees]

There all legitimate questions as far as I'm concerned. Good job

[Tim]

realness.

[MandaBear]

Interesting short piece

[Steve]

This is thought provoking and the kinds of questions that need be continually be asked in order to someday finally find the answers.

[Cody Wiggins]

These are the questions of life that will never be answered. Although we may not understand it it still happens so we must tolerate it.

[highthought]

its called life
we dont have the choice
whether to come in or not
if u want me to add
just ask

[The Doctor]

I would love to toss answers back and forth with you on this topic. But it's very good. Short but I feel it graps the reader. Makes the reader take time to actually read and decide what it is they want to answer, not only for you, but for themselves. Very good poem for self reflection for anyone who reads this. Very good work.