No Last Kisses Part 2 (Ex-Boyfriend)

No Last Kisses Part 2 (Ex-Boyfriend)

A Poem by Nickole Alhoni Ra'Nae

What don't You understand?

You ask for a last kiss and I reject you.

You hug me and I hesitate to push you away.

Why can't you get the hint?

The way I turn into puddy in your hands when you touch me.

When you look at me I instantaniously smile.

How I hug you longer, better, more intamate than any other person.

Why give you the last kiss?

I'm obviously still in love with you.

I don't want you to leave

I don't want you to forget me.

If I give you that last kiss it's the end... of US!

I don't want us to end!

Dedicated to my first love.

No Last Kisses!

© 2010 Nickole Alhoni Ra'Nae


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The truth always has a better feel than created fiction. Beautiful and felt. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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nice writing! strong words... i see the emotion jumping off the screen at me... great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice job here. You write and portray powerful emotions through your writing. Awesome job, this is one of my favorites.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw, cute and sweet. i guess u r saying that a kiss can't secribe how much u love him. it reminds me of the saying "There's no such thing as goodbye." u r also saying it would never be ur last because u will see each other again. great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Nickole Alhoni Ra'Nae
Nickole Alhoni Ra'Nae

Pittsburgh, PA



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