the almighty

to him

The almighty is the mightiest monarch

Creator of heaven and earth

I know no metaphor to quantify him

Immortal and invisible

 

The almighty is the super most deity

Operator of heaven and earth

I know no simile to quantify him

Omnipresent and omnipotent

 

Lord, God father almighty

Thy will be done on earth

Let heaven and earth tremble and hail

The supreme and the mightiest

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

A nice description of god's power. I wouldn't say that there is a hidden message or a storyline to this. It's simple, yet catching. The use of what I call "strength words" is very present , and they obviously work well in connection to god's power.

[emmy bon]

thanks; i appreciate

[Tom]

Indeed Sir, God is indeed omnipotent ! You should take a look at my poem ' I am Zeus' for an alternative perspective !

Your poem pays God the highest compliment, no simile or metaphor needed !

[emmy bon]

thanks for your time tomi; i appreciate

[Tom]

You are welcome Emmy