to whom it may concern

in a world slowly fading, let's try peace, and achieve a vision of how we should be living as brothers.

To whom it may concern

Let’s give peace a chance

Life is all about trial and error

What’s all the palaver about?

The uproar, insurgents, solitary violence

Our young ones are not save anymore

Delinquent teenagers at last that’s if you survive……

What are we now to care for?

The three square meals a day

Where to lay at days end

Education that is in the state of dilapidation

Or the dilatory government in all aspect

Society sucks

To whom it may concern

Please let it not suck forever

Some can’t stand it forever

Let’s try peace

And see how tall and strong we can stand together

Sure, there is more to this brave adventure

If you ever belief.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tom]

Thoughtful and provocative, this quality poem invites the reader to take a step back and have a look at the world around him and see if they can make more of a contribution to society, rather than allow the elite only to prosper !

A splendid write with a strong philanthropic message throughout, well done !

[emmy bon]

thanks for your time, i appreciate