silent sufferers

If the highway could complain
what would it say of the traffic?
If the cow could grumble
what would it say of the dagger?
If the hen could speak
what would it say of omeletteers?
If the spoon could revolt
what would it say of the steam?
If the anvil could talk
what would say of the furnance?
But why do they all keep mute?
Do they enjoy their silent suffering?
perhaps they do
Maybe they don't.

Reviews

[Tom]

Sadly many suffer in silence as there no-one to hear them !

Nice poem again, I like your style !

[emmy bon]

thanks, i appreciate

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Wow!m this is a short witty poem, i enjoy is. Well done.

[emmy bon]

thank you

[Marie]

Perhaps they do not know they are suffering.

[emmy bon]

yea, and maybe they know, just that its there fate. thanks for the review

[Tomi]

Interesting! love the thought pattern.Very different piece! welldone

[emmy bon]

thanks

[amarlaksh]

the very detailed composition amazes me. Excellent write

[emmy bon]

thanks