Wtf with the poems this week? -shrugs- Well, I've written another one; apparently I have a thing with repetion(repeation? Please correct that spelling if its wrong x_x) in my poems. I promise, the first chapter to Winter's Clutch WILL be up soon :)
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Oh great poem.
Btw, I'm kinda OCD, so the word you're looking for is repetition haha. Slap me for being so nosy, I'm sorry!
Back to your poem, it's so well written.
Sometimes poets that try the repetition don't do it properly & end up screwing up a perfectly wonderful poem but you didn't do that. The repetition really worked.
The ending was great, although may argue it is sort of cliche.
Great write, I really enjoyed it.
Oh great poem.
Btw, I'm kinda OCD, so the word you're looking for is repetition haha. Slap me for being so nosy, I'm sorry!
Back to your poem, it's so well written.
Sometimes poets that try the repetition don't do it properly & end up screwing up a perfectly wonderful poem but you didn't do that. The repetition really worked.
The ending was great, although may argue it is sort of cliche.
Great write, I really enjoyed it.
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