Caterpillar

A Poem by E.J. Michalec

The darkness enveloped my skin
Sorrowful cocoon
Perhaps one day I will fly
Maybe some day I’ll see the light
As for now,
I guess a girl could dream

© 2018 E.J. Michalec

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R.E. Ray

Good metaphor and title. I like the raw humility throughout, and the hope you convey at the end. Nice, simple piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

Your message contains a perfect balance of melancholy & hopefulness. Excellent metaphor used consistently thru-out your poem with strong imagery & feeling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the feedback!

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Added on January 13, 2018
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E.J. Michalec

Cleveland, OH

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I'm Em. I'm 21. Poetry for me is a valve to release the multitude of pressures that come my way in life. This profile more or less has every piece I've written since I was as young as 13 and the art o.. more..

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