Celebrating Our Love

My slumber in your arms

The soft blankets, your warm body

Dreaming of journeys with paved roads

Leading up to mountains of endless possibilities

Soaring through soft clouds reaching for the heavens

Waking up to your slow gentle breathing, your radiance

Loving you even more with every breath, every instant

Together is a newfound dream, still fresh and true.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[NCPanthersgurl]

Beautiful, reminds me of my own romance, and it's amazing power and grace. Love is an amazing feeling when you find it. I wonder if you lengthened this...? I just think you have something really good here, and perhaps lengthening it would take your reader more into the emotion you feel?

Even if you don't expand it, it's really well written. Nice =]