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Thinking of you

My body dies

My mind revives

And like the evening sky

She sends me beautiful

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Author's Note

I wrote this a WHILE ago haha. I was looking through my old poems on www.allpoetry.com/.Em. ... I'm so mad I threw away my old notebooks full of writing but I thank to goodness I posted some online. I think I might be alternating between the cafe and allpoetry more often. Anyway, thoughts and comments? Leave them below. :)

Reviews

[KAin]

I like this one! It seems to be speaking of an out-of-body experience. Perhaps love? The sensation of death is in this poem, but also of rebirth,the idea of an afterlife. The spirit is revived by the intense emotion, and leaves the body, unable to contain its own joy... The final line lingers with me, an image of a spirit draped across the sky. Or that's what i got from it, anyway :-)
Short,but beautiful. Keep writing!

[.Em.]

That's a beautiful interpretation! Thank you so much for reading and your kind words :)

[Dhaye]

Nice wordplay. In just few words you captivated the readers' interest.
Keep writing!

[.Em.]

Thank you for reading ^_^… I will :)

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.

[maria ( rose)]

love the writing on this one:)

[.Em.]

Thank you so much :)

[SyberRose]

Lovely thoughts em...enjoyed reading...Rose:)

[.Em.]

Thank you so much :)