Coalescence
A Poem by
emman
Dissimilar together
In different colors
Making it fitter
To live more closer
We smile when we praise
We dance with one faith
Talk with anything
Everything’s interesting
A process
Of life’s caress
To a fields of green
Where hopes can be seen
You are light
Pure as white
In my mind
You’re inside
It’s not a tale
This won’t fail
By God’s grace
We’re amazed
The world is turning
Unexpected meeting
Babies in the past
Hoping to last
Thanks for the smile
Worthwhile
Thanks for the stare
I care
© 2012 emman
Reviews
Beautifully written and structured. I have my interpretations of it, might not be a hundred percent correct. Enjoyable to read, nonetheless. It expresses a feeling with intensity and simplicity.
Posted 6 Years Ago
This was really nicely written. I loved this message in this poem. I love how you can tell you love this person too and they make you happy. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This was really nicely written. I loved this message in this poem. I love how you can tell you love this person too and they make you happy. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
i see a nick tie, this seems like a concrete poetry . very well expressed.
Posted 12 Years Ago
i see a nick tie, this seems like a concrete poetry . very well expressed.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on June 17, 2012
Last Updated on June 17, 2012
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emman Butuan, CARAGA, Philippines
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