Crying Without Tears

It suddenly came

I'm feeling so lame

I don’t know why

I can’t fly

 

It’s already night

Still I can’t fight

The torture inside

Pain side by side

 

It suddenly came

I'm feeling so lame

I don’t know why

I can’t fly

 

My eyes are open

Can’t see anything

Smiling so often

Now I’m crying

 

It suddenly came

I'm feeling so lame

I don’t know why

I can’t fly

 

Is this paralysis?

Don’t know what this is

Yes I’m crying

No tears are falling

 

It suddenly came

I'm feeling so lame

I don’t know why

I can’t fly

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ivy]

It's beautiful and heartbreaking. The way you repeated the first stanza had a strong impact throughout. I'm sorry you're so sad and I hope you feel better! It really is an amazing poem.

[Pax]

your just sad, cheer up my friend and everything will be alright kahit na matagal.
nice write and i like the flow of rhythm like a lyric of a song.I like the title will suited to the poem.

[Sweets]

Wonderful flow, it's like a song, good work!

[AK]

That's so sad:((( but the write is great! And please take rest:)

[Tasha]

This is so sad, but a great write.