Living Like the Ants

When I was alone yesterday afternoon

I saw little creatures with so many clones

Fast like a rocket flying up to the moon

And you cannot see them walking all alone

 

Yes, I was looking to the cute tiny ants

With curiosity and keen observation to each one

They were saving food taken from everywhere

To feed their colony when the world is despair

 

Ants are very hardworking creatures

They work night and day to increase their ventures

Armies are always alert to protect

The queen who’s the only laying all the eggs

 

To support each other is their basic rule

No ants can be considered as an unproductive fool

Because they help each other digging a hole

To keep their hopes and making their lives full

 

If people could just live following this lifestyle

And putting into mind this kind of idea

That if we support each other without letting go

Then life would be better without uneasy flow

 

I just want to remind with all my concern

That life on earth is not everlasting

By the right time all of us will vanish

 Save for the best… hope is more than a wish

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Enjoy reading..digest the thought..SMILE :)

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You made this interesting and really tried proving a great point. :)
Excellent like always. Keep up the great work.


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Riley]

This poem brings a great point for all of the people in the world. We have to work together and each person do their share, and not cheat out the government and what not.

[stars are far]

smile :D
this was nice ... and it is true .. hehe ..
keep it uP ;)

[Emilie Barn]

It's really interesting. I liked it!

[Miss CB]

Great job! Loved how interesting you made this. Well done!

[Underestimated]

very nice, nice. Interesting too!!

[Nyx]

it's interesting how you write about things as mundane as ants

[Kuhr Gred]

haha.. i got laughed while reading this.. and this true.. i like it so much.. it is also a motivation we should like ants to be hard working and patience whatever happens.. anyway GREAT WRITE .. thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

[Brittany]

Preach on! Great sentiments. I enjoyed this very much.