Cats

I love cats_______________I hate cats___________________I fear cats_______I love cats

Oh cats! How lovely they are

Cats! I used to bring them wherever its far

Cats! I used to play with them whenever I'm bored

And giving them freedom without putting a cord

Cats! bit me accidentally

And made a deep wound that was so bloody

I cried out the pain of my uneasy body

And hate all the cats I don't want them to stay

Cats! jumped so quickly straight to my belly

So destructive! when I was watching a movie

Made the baby cry

When it was so noisy

Snake was crawling on our lobby

Cats! ran straight and fight so quickly

They made the snake crawl away

Oh! how I LOVE CATS so brave and lovely

Author's Note

enjoy reading :)

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Ok, first of all, i can definitely relate to that, i don't have a cat but i'd love to, i really like'em ! I think you've done a wonderful job giving us a "storyline" but focusing on the feelings each "period" evoked in you, avoiding the ordinary (and even a little boring) narrative form :)
Great work, that was a great read :)

[Pax]

enjoyed it, cats are my favorites, i have mine back at home, lovely written.

[Aditi Mahajan]

I love cats!! :)

[AK]

Interesting poem:) we can sometimes have many contradicting feelings for one object. I liked how you ended the poem; with a positive feeling. Keep writing!

[Riley]

This poem is intereting. I like how it goes from liking to hating to loving them. Very neat.

[SimplyOlivia]

Cats are my favorite. I have six at home, thats cause they're outside cats and aren't fixed. They are my companions and I love them muchly. This reminds me of them.

[Summer'sBreeze]

LOL XD
What a great write!

[Emilie Barn]

Lol! Funny and nice. I like it =))

[Amata Luna]

Funny, the flow of this poem is just lovely!!! I have four cats and they're my love. Hahaha. Truly, cats are lovable creatures. Ever graceful and yes, they can be an annoyance sometimes. Glad to read something refreshing as this regarding cats. ;)

[Sleeping Maiden]

LOL. this was joyful, amusing and so pleasant to read!! I can tell you really love cats. heehee..