The Picture Frame

Poem of a Broken Heart

Sharing the best of our memories
Was the best experience we have kept
Basically we took pictures of love
Enjoyed the color of the skies above

We took a special picture
For us to remember
That I was once your king and you were my queen
Ruled our own world in reality or dream

The road that was joined by two loving hearts
Was divided into two unequal parts
Seemed to be lonely in all passing days
Wondering how to live with a life full of maze

Now that you're gone it is making me lame
Looking at our picture in broken picture frame
Checking to my heart if still I could tame
Destroyed by love that was just a game.

Author's Note

Actually I destroyed that picture frame when we broke up

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Ok, first of all just for using a rhyme scheme this poem is amazing !!
You also (thanks to the rhymes and more in general to a nice use of the words' sounds) created a great flow, words just slide when you read it :)
It is simple but at the same time very expressive.
Great job !

[Monica-Antoinetta-Magda..]

so true and honest, it's easy to relate to..you did a really great job on this one! (:

[Riley]

Wow.... I totally felt this one because I've been there. A guy that I dated would take pictures with me in a photobooth and we even got one of the black and white photos eliminated just so they wouldn't ruin. I cut the picture up. Good way to let go.

[emman]

salamat :)

[Emilie Barn]

Sad, true and nice! =))

[Krista Weiss]

Kinda sad but I loved it :)

[Kuhr Gred]

It is about love.. but even this is a love poem.. sometimes i remember my best friend.. because she really loves pictures.. :) KEEP IT UP.. i put your 2 poem in my library.. because really great ;)
- Kuhr Gred

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww. so sad. but it's fine. Let your pain flow into your poetry my dear friend!!! express it. lol. I'm sorry you are heart-broken. It can be painful.. but i'm sure another girl will make you happy! It's hard to move on also but your past is what makes you, you. =) Awesome write. i felt the ache here... so heartfelt!!!!

[emman]

hmmmm.. :(