Be Back

To thee I intend

From the start I aver

That I will extend

My greatest affair

 

Thy face is my grin

Special as a ring

For I have to win

The distance you bring

 

In a lawn I’m alone

Regaining the image

Like your call in my phone

When I’m in besiege

 

The mission is a call

For us to be firm

That we should not fall

In the saddest term

 

Now, when I think

Of the memories that’s left

Your loveliest blink

Put my heart in depth

 

My cherubic man

And your love

Is a plan

From above

 

Yes, I’ll wait

Til we join again

And open the gate

To the best that I can

 

My cherubic man

Clasp my heart

See my dan

Your finest art

 

Author's Note

Enjoy reading.. :)

Reviews

[Queen Empress]

A very deep and touching poem..amazing :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Stunning word play, it is a beautiful love piece. It is honest and captivating. Thanks for sharing.

[emman]

THanks SO MUCH! :D

[Pax]

a lonely poem, i felt the sadness and the waiting for someone....
distance can be bearable if communication is constant.
enjoyed this write, its nice to see you around kabayan!

[emman]

salamat kabayan..hahaha..kabayan!kumusta?hmmm..naay uban dili ganahan sa kaong style ani nga poem..bisayaon lang nako akong comment ha..hehe..dili daw ko dapat mogamit og archaic words..hehe..sakita oy.. :( pero sige lang,,gi try ra man sad ni nako nga style of writing.. :)

[Pax]

ngano man?? imo na gi wala iyang komento? si kinsa man na siya? nganong man mag buot siya...its a freeworld ... we have our own freedom of expression... poetry can be interpreted in different ways.... nabasa ko yung comment niya... I say: its a modern world now...why is it so wrong to used that word... we are our own unique way of expressing we don't have to follow all the rules of the past... i see that you used that word mainly for artistic expression and not write like in the past... you are not a moron my friend... if someone called you that then clearly this person is not being constructive on what to say about the poem and attack the author...

[emman]

mao lage kabayan..nasakitan kog maayo..sakto jud ka..kada isa sa atoa naay kanya kanya nga STYLE OF WRITING..right?Chris iyang pangalan kabayan,kanang tigulang nga writer diri..sige lang..maynalang nahuwasan ko pag encourage ni Elisa sa akoa.. :)

[Pax]

nabasa nako ba, naka agto ko sa iyng profile... di ra man ikaw ang na iinis sa kanya.... may mga rules siya na dapat ganinto lang, na ganyan lang dapat ang poem... may nabasa nga ako doon nag review sa kanya medyo galit....Eli is a good friend of mine... great person...

[emman]

mao jud kabayan..well,poetry is actually a writing of free will..so dili siya dapat manghinambog..okay ra man tana to kung e criticize niya akong poem kay madawat pa nako..pero and dili nako madawat kay ang tawagon kog MORON..kinsa man siya para tawagon kog moron?

[Pax]

yes... abi gud nako na ok to siya na tao sa una... naka basa ko sa iyang mga review sa una... seems ok lng short to the point... now kabalo na ko sa iyang ugali... ayaw kabalaka... ang mga taong nanglalait ay salamin lng sa kanilang sarili..meaning its just the reflection of themselves... ganun yung kasabihan na pagkakatanda ko.. :D you have friends that support you than yung isa lang....

[emman]

salamat kabayan..feeling man jud niya known kaayo siya nga writer kay daghan na siyag na published nga mga writings..well,kung tinood man gani dili siya dapat manghinambog..dapat gani tabangan niya ang mga young writers nga mag improve sa poetry writing dili kay sultian niya ug moron..dili jud siya molambo ana kung ing ana iyang ipakita nga batasan diri sa WC..well,mas importante gihapon ang maayo nga pamatasan..ikaduha nanang katalinuhan..right my friend??maynalang gani kay naa mo..kaundangon jud kog sulat diri sa WC kung wala mo nag encourage sa akoa..salamat kaayo sa inyoha kabayan.. :)

[Pax]

walang ano man :D
I'm glad you feel better about it now...
ganun rin ako last time... maraming tumolng sa akin... so its time ako naman.. si Eli rin tumolong siya pagaanin yung yung sama ng loob... its no sweat kabayan basta ikaw... balik ka lng, sulat lng ng sulat... we learned everyday in our own unique way... ayaw na to siya pansina...

[emman]

sure will kabayan..now taht I got some insult, I'll make use of it as my inspiration to write more and share the most of life..thanks kabayan..gaan na akong paminaw karon :D

[Krista Weiss]

Great poem!! :)

[emman]

Thank you so much Krista :)